03 Jul 1945, Barbara Anslow's diary
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Submitted by Barbara Anslow on Mon, 2016-07-04 15:48
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Tue, 3 Jul 1945
Got Limelight story back from Mrs Jenner, her criticism: characterisation isn't good; it is far too long; characters subservient to the plot rather than the plot dependent on the characters; it won't sell as it is but the plot is quite good. It was a shock to hear that the conversations were confusing and garrulous.
Swimming in afternoon.
Peg and I played Mrs Smalley and Joyce (? who), and called a small slam and made it.
